English Composition 제 6 주차 2015 년 2 학기 대상 : 국제어학과 1 학년 교수자 : 전현주
6 주차강의목표 NEW TOEIC WRITING Chapter 1 토익라이팅테스트 Question 6-7 Respond to a written request: 이메일답변작성하기 - Overview - directions and assessment criteria - Basic Frame of E-mail writing Writing tips: Strategies for Successful Reading
Question 6-7: Overview 목적 : 제시된이메일의내용을파악하고주어진지시사항이요구하는내용을충실히포함하는답변을작성한다. 이를통해다양한어휘의활용능력, 간단한정보, 질문, 지식, 이야기등을전달하기위한문장작성능력을측정하여업무및일상과제수행능력을가늠한다. 구성 : 총 2 문제로문제당 10 분씩, 총 20 분의시간이주어진다. 화면에보낸이, 받는이, 제목을포함한이메일의내용과그를통해작성해야할지시사항이주어지므로이를명확하게이해하는것이선행되어야한다. 문항수 : 총 2 개시간 : 총 20 분 ( 문제당 10 분 )
Question 6-7: Direction
Question 6-7: Direction
Question 6-7: 평가요소와기준평가기준문장의구성과다양성 / 어휘의수준과다양성 / 글의전체적인구성 점수 세부평가기준 0 4 점 4 - 지시사항에서요구하는내용을빠짐없이작성 - 적절한연결어, 논리적인구성, 다양한문장사용 - 받는사람에대한적절한어조유지 - 보내는사람이의도한의미를해치지않는사소한문법적오류 3 - 지시사항에서요구하는내용중한가지를미작성또는미완성 - 하나정도의문장에의미를알수없는심각한문법적오류 - 위 2 가지를제외한부분에서는문제가없음 2 - 지시사항이요구하는내용을두개이상미작성또는미완성 - 논리적연결성이결여됨 - 받는사람에대한부적절한어조 - 두개이상의문장에의미를알수없는심각한문법적오류 1 - 지시사항이요구하는내용을거의다루지못함 - 위의평가요소그무엇도만족시키지못함 0 - 문제의관련성이없음 / 문장들의의미가없음 / 지시사항에나온단어들을그대로나열 / 미작성
Basic Frame of E-mail writing Salutation ( 인사말 ) Message ( 본문 ) Closing ( 맺음말 ) 예 ) Dear Sir (Madam), Dear Mr. (Mrs. Ms.) Smith, Hello, Sir (Madam), Hello, Mr. (Mrs. Ms.) Smith, To whom it may concern, Hi, 문제의 directions 에서요구하는사항을하나도빠뜨리지않고정확히본문에적는다. 예 ) Sincerely, Sincerely yours, Cordially, Cordially yours, Best wishes, Best regards,
Basic Frame of E-mail writing Directions: Ask TWO questions about the motor company. Salutation ( 인사말 ) Dear Mr. Carrick Message ( 본문 ) Closing ( 맺음말 ) I d like to ask two questions about your company. First, where is your company located? Second, what countries do you have branches in? I will be looking forward to receiving your quick reply. Thank you. Sincerely,
E-MAIL 작성시유용한표현 1. 이메일작성시작하기 I received your e-mail regarding ex) I received your e-mail regarding job interviews at your company. Q: 지난주귀사의상점에서제가구입한프린트와관련하여보내주신메일을받았습니다. à I received your email regarding the printer I bought from your store a week ago. There is in response to your email regarding Ex) This is in response to your email regarding the special discount. Q: 이것은다음달근무표와관련된귀하의이메일에대한답장입니다. à This is in response to your email regarding the next month s work schedule.
E-MAIL 작성시유용한표현 1. 이메일작성시작하기 I m writing this email to ex) I m writing this email to make a complaint about the poor service at your shop. Q: 귀사에대해서몇가지질문을하려고본메일을씁니다. à I m writing this email to ask a few questions about your company. Thank your for the email from Ex) Thank you for the email from one of your sales associates. Q: 귀사의고객서비스부서에서보내주신이메일에감사드립니다. à Thank you for the email from your customer service department.
E-MAIL 작성시유용한표현 2. 질문및요청하기 I would like to know ex) I would like to know how I can apply to have an interview with your school. Q: 첫날사무실에제가무엇을가져오도록되어있는지알고싶습니다. à I would like to know what I am supposed to bring to the office on my first day. Can you please tell me + if/what/when/which/why + s +v Ex) Can you please tell me if I am allowed to bring my pet to the banquet you re hosting? Q: 영화가몇시에시작하고몇시에끝나는지말씀해주시겠습니까? à Can you please tell me what time the movie starts and what time it finishes?
E-MAIL 작성시유용한표현 2. 질문및요청하기 Is it possible (for A) to ex) Is it possible for me to take charge of the whole process during the construction period? Q: 관객앞에서예정된저의발표를취소할수있습니까? à Is it possible to cancel my planned announcement before the audience? I was wondering Ex) I was wondering what qualifications I should have to be promoted. Q: 회사보안카드를받으려면어디로가야할지궁금했습니다. à I was wondering where I should go to get the company security card?
E-MAIL 작성시유용한표현 3. 제안하기 I would like to propose/suggest ex) I would like to propose my ideas on how to increase employee productivity. Q: 귀사의상품을향상시킬수있는두가지다른방법들을제안하고싶습니다. à I would like to propose two different ideas that would improve your products. I think A should Ex) I think we should purchase more items to meet increasing customer demands. Q: 저는공장이가능한한빨리보수를해야한다고생각합니다. à I think the factory should go through a renovation as early as possible. How about ing? Ex) How about taking them out to a great restaurant located along the seashore? Q: 백화점에서향수무료샘플을나누어주는것이어떨까요? è How about giving out free samples of perfume at department stores?
4. 기타 E-MAIL 작성시유용한표현 - 질문을시작할때유용한표현 I have two questions about the job you offered me, the pay and the working hours. I would like to ask you a few things about the job position. Followings are the questions I would like to ask you about. First, Second, - 요청에대한답변을기다리겠다는의미의유용한표현 Look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. I would like to get your response as soon as possible. I will be waiting for your reply. - 끝맺음을할때유용한표현 Thank you. Thanks for your kind cooperation. Your consideration will be appreciated.
REFERENCES 넥서스콘텐츠개발팀 (2010) NEW TOEIC WRITING 넥서스. James A. Reinking & Robert Von Der Osten (2014) Strategies for Successful Writing: A Rhetoric, Research Guide, Reader, and Handbook 10 th ed. Pearson. http://blog.daum.net/junyoung9197/6076 https://www.ets.org/media/tests/toeic/pdf/ TOEIC_sw_sample_tests.pdf