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머리말 Globalized Society.,.,,,, (writing). e-mail..,. Unit Our Life,, Writing Process, Paragraphs, Grammar. Task.. 2013 9 Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover. Mark Twain i
Content Unit 1 My Heroes 1 INTRODUCTION 1 OUR LIFE 1 WRITING PROCESS 5 GRAMMAR 13 Unit 2 Conditions of Happiness 19 INTRODUCTION 19 WRITING PROCESS 19 PARAGRAPHS 22 GRAMMAR 27 Unit 3 Bumps in the Road 33 INTRODUCTION 33 OUR LIFE 33 WRITING PROCESS 38 GRAMMAR 42 Content iii
Unit 4 When Dreams Meet Reality 49 INTRODUCTION 49 WRITING PROCESS 49 PARAGRAPHS 52 GRAMMAR 59 Unit 5 The Bliss and the Stress of Travel 65 INTRODUCTION 65 OUR LIFE 65 WRITING PROCESS 70 GRAMMAR 77 Unit 6 Fashion through the Decades 83 INTRODUCTION 83 WRITING PROCESS 83 PARAGRAPHS 86 GRAMMAR 92 Unit 7 Review (1 6) 99 Unit 1 My Heroes 99 Unit 2 Conditions of Happiness 102 Unit 3 Bumps in the Road 107 Unit 4 When Dreams Meet Reality 110 Unit 5 The Bliss and the Stress of Travel 113 Unit 6 Fashion through the Decades 117 iv
Unit 8 Forgive and Forget 121 INTRODUCTION 121 OURLIFE 121 WRITING PROCESS 126 GRAMMAR 133 Unit 9 Love Actually 141 INTRODUCTION 141 WRITING PROCESS 141 PARAGRAPHS 144 GRAMMAR 150 Unit 10 He Did What? 159 INTRODUCTION 159 OUR LIFE 159 WRITING PROCESS 164 GRAMMAR 173 Unit 11 Shocking News 181 INTRODUCTION 181 WRITING PROCESS 181 PARAGRAPHS 184 GRAMMAR 192 Content v
Unit 12 Tying the Knot 199 INTRODUCTION 199 OUR LIFE 199 WRITING PROCESS 203 GRAMMAR 214 Unit 13 Review (8 12) 225 Unit 8 Forgive and Forget 225 Unit 9 Love Actually 231 Unit 10 He Did What? 235 Unit 11 Shocking News 240 Unit 12 Tying the Knot 244 ANSWERS Unit 1~13 249 vi
Unit 1 My Heroes INTRODUCTION Topic My heroes Writing Prewriting, organizing, writing, revising, & editing Grammar Subject-verb agreement 주제 쓰기 문법,,, OUR LIFE Big Fan Penny : Jim? What a pleasure bumping into you! It s been too long since high school. Jim : Penny! What?! How?! What are you doing here? Penny : I m teaching English here! Jim : Really? Me too! Penny : What a coincidence! Oh sorry, I didn t notice you were reading. Jim : No worries about my reading. Penny : You re really in your element. Chilling and reading, just like I remember you in high school. Jim : Yep, just reading a book about my hero. Penny : Steve Jobs, still, right? Jim : You got it. I m still a big fan. Unit 1 My Heroes 1
Penny : Jim, don t you ever get tired of reading about the same person? Jim : Not yet. At any rate, every author has something else to say. This book is about Steve Job s involvement with Pixar. Penny : Groovy. Wall-E is one of my favorite flicks. Jim : Yeah, it s a wonderful movie and it s so moving. It s just nice to have someone to look up to. Wait, didn t we go to the movies in high school? Penny : I...I think so Jim : Hmmm...anyway what about you? Don t you have a hero? Penny : Oh totally, my grandmother. Jim : Your grandmother? That s so not you! Penny : I know but she was a super-progressive feminist. She fought for immigrant women s rights in the state of Ohio in the 50 s and 60 s. Jim : Get out of town! Penny : For real. She did a lot and was even above the law at times. Jim : She sounds as amazing as Steve Jobs! Penny : Yeah, and she did loads of organizing without an iphone or computer! Jim : I m so glad we ran into each other. Let s do lunch next week. Penny : Right on! (Looks at her smartphone) Oh, I can pencil you in for Wednesday, but I can put you in pen for Thursday! Jim : Thursday is perfect. Penny, you re my hero. Penny : Oh please! You re too much. I ll see you next week. Jim : Peace out! (Jim leaves) Penny : Finally, I found him. It's been too long since high school. My heart was broken, but now...jim (Penny starts to cry, lights dim, cue music) Translation 열혈팬 Penny : Jim?.,. Jim : Penny!!!? Penny :? 2
Jim :?! Penny :!. Jim :. Penny :... Jim :.. Penny : Steve Jobs,? Jim :.. Penny :, Jim? Jim :.. Steve Job Pixar. Penny :! Wall-E. Jim :,..,? Penny : Jim :.?? Penny :,. Jim :?! Penny :.. 50 60. Jim :! Penny :.. Jim : Steve Jobs. Penny :,. Jim :.. Penny :! ( ),,. Jim :., Penny. Penny :!.. Jim :. (Jim ) Penny :.., Jim (Penny,, ) Unit 1 My Heroes 3
Comprehension Questions 1. What is one of Penny s favorite movies? (1) Titanic (2) Toy Story (3) Wall-E (4) A Bug s Life 2. Where is Jim? (1) In a coffee shop (2) In an academy (3) In a bookstore (4) In a zoo 3. When will Penny and Jim have Lunch together? (1) Wednesday (2) Tuesday (3) Friday (4) Thursday Words & Expressions Words & Expressions bumping into you no worries. in your element chilling big fan at any rate groovy flick(s) look up to totally That s so not you! get out of town above the law loads of ran into each other let s do lunch pencil you in / put you in pen you re too much peace out Translation,., ( ),,,,. ( ), (=Goodbye) 4
WRITING PROCESS The Procese of Writing Stage 1 : Prewriting A : Based on the theme, brainstorm by making a list of people you might want to write about. B : After choosing one of those people as your subject, brainstorm again by listing as many ideas as you can about that person C : After brainstorming a list of ideas about that person, narrow down the list to the key ideas you want to use in your paragraph Examples A: My Heroes (people I respect and admire) Mohandas Gandhi Roh, Moo-hyun Park Young-hee (my grandmother) Kim, Kangcheol (my university professor) Oprah Winfrey Sejong the Great Kim Yu-Na Steve Jobs Lee Areum (my sixth grade teacher) B: Steve Jobs co-founded Apple, Inc. with Steve Wozniak left Apple in 1985 but came back in 1997 to save the company named the company Apple because he loved picking apples a naughty boy in elementary school, his teacher had to bribe him to study diagnosed with cancer in 2003, passed away in 2011 drove a silver Mercedes-Benz SL 55 AMG Unit 1 My Heroes 5
a master of innovation and Father of the Digital Revolution birth father from Syria revolutionary electronics products imac, ipod, iphone, ipad loved to wear black turtlenecks and Levi s blue jeans he was adopted rescued music industry by creating itunes traveled to India to find spiritual enlightenment, then became a Zen Buddhist co-founded Pixar Animation studios. Pixar s first big hit was Toy Story salary as CEO of Apple was one dollar per year! big fan of the Beatles Pixar also made Finding Nemo, the Incredibles, Wall-E, Up C: Steve Jobs co-founded Apple, Inc. with Steve Wozniak left Apple in 1985 but came back in 1997 to save the company named the company Apple because he loved picking apples a naughty boy in elementary school, his teacher had to bribe him to study diagnosed with cancer in 2003, passed away in 2011 drove a silver Mercedes-Benz SL 55 AMG a master of innovation and Father of the Digital Revolution he was adopted, and his birth father was from Syria revolutionary electronics products imac, ipod, iphone, ipad loved to wear black turtlenecks and Levi s blue jeans rescued music industry by creating itunes traveled to India to find spiritual enlightenment, then became a Zen Buddhist co-founded Pixar Animation studios, revolutionary computer animation company Pixar s first big hit was feature-length film Toy Story salary as CEO of Apple was one dollar per year! big fan of the Beatles Pixar also made Finding Nemo, the Incredibles, Wall-E, Monsters Inc. 6
Stage 1 : 미리쓰기 A:. B:. C: (key ideas). A: 나의영웅 ( 자신이존경하거나동경하는인물 ) ( ) ( ) (6 ) B: Steve Jobs Steve Wozniak 1985 1997 Apple. Mercedes Benz Benz SL 55 AMG, imac, ipod, iphone, ipad itunes Pixar Animation studios, Toy Story Pixar Finding Nemo, the Incredibles, Wall-E, Monsters Inc. Unit 1 My Heroes 7
Stage 2 : Organizing Make a basic outline of your paragraph Examples Steve Jobs is my hero because he was a master innovator. He was co-founder and CEO of Apple, Inc. - left Apple in 1985 but came back in 1997 to save the company - revolutionary electronics products imac, ipod, iphone, ipad - rescued music industry by creating itunes He co-founded Pixar Animation Studios - revolutionary computer animation company - first big hit feature length film Toy Story - also The Incredibles, Monsters Inc., Wall-E, Finding Nemo Stage 2 : 구성하기 (outline).. CEO. - 1985 1997. - imac, ipod, iphone, ipad - itunes. Pixar Animation Studios. - -, Toy Story - The Incredibles, Monsters Inc., Wall-E, Finding Nemo 8
Stage 3 : Writing Write a rough draft of your paragraph. Unedited Paragraph My Brilliant Hero Steve Jobs is my hero. Because he was master innovator. He was co-founded and CEO of two revolutionary electronics companies, Apple and Pixar. His first big company was Apple. After starting company he left in 1985 but came back in 1997 to save the company. He helped create amazing new electronics product such as the imac, ipod, iphone, ipad and so on. He rescued music industry by creating itunes. His another big company was Pixar Animation Studios, a revolutionary producer of computer animation films. His first big hit with Pixar was the feature length film Toy Story. After that they made many entertaining and successful computer animation films such as The Incredibles, Monsters Inc., Wall-E, Finding Nemo. I admire and respect Steve Jobs for creating these companies and making so wonderful things, and I think he is real Father of the Digital Age. Stage 4 : Revising & Editing Find somebody to read and edit your paragraph and give you feedback. Make the appropriate editing changes and rewrite your paragraph, keeping all of the feedback in mind. Edited Paragraph My Brilliant Hero Steve Jobs is my hero because he was a master innovator. He was the co-founder and CEO of two revolutionary electronics companies, Apple and Pixar. His first big company was Apple. After starting Apple he left in 1985, but came back in 1997 to save the company. At Apple he helped create amazing new electronics products such Unit 1 My Heroes 9
as the imac, ipod, iphone and ipad. He also rescued the music industry by creating itunes. His other big company was Pixar Animation Studios, a revolutionary producer of computer animated films. His first big hit with Pixar was the feature length film Toy Story. After that, they made many entertaining and successful computer-animated films such as The Incredibles, Monsters Inc., Wall-E, and Finding Nemo. I admire and respect Steve Jobs for creating these companies and making such wonderful things, and I think he is realy the Father of the Digital Age. Stage 3 : 글쓰기 (rough draft) Stage 4 : 수정하기 & 교정하기 A: B:.. Apple Pixar CEO. Apple. 1985 Apple 1997. Apple imac, ipod, iphone, ipad. itunes. Pixar Animation Studios..,, -E,... 10
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